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ajmole
ajmole Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Title: The Mysterious Tombstone Mystery

Chapter One - A Tombstone
I was hanging around the graveyard, waiting to leave. My grandmother just went up to the sky's, and my mom was leaving flowers by her tombstone. As I wandered around, one tombstone caught my eye. There was nothing on it. I then noticed that dust was everywhere on it. I brushed the dust away.
Letters were reveled. It said "Mark S. Doomed". "Just another tombstone," I told myself. "Mark!" my mom yelled. "We're leaving, and I don't think you want to stay here!"
"Coming!" I replied. I turned around and ran to the car. As we were leaving, I didn't see that the tombstone started to glow red.

Chapter Two - Don the Robot
I was playing a game of 'Sorry!' with my younger brother Timmy when I heard a knock on the door. When I opened it, I saw a robot. I jumped back when it started talking. "Greetings Mark," it said. "I am Don." "How do you know my name?" I asked him gasping for breath.

"Well, I am here to bring a message so of course I know your name!" Don exclaimed. "Also, you look like a 'Mark' to me," he added. I brought Don into my room and locked the door. "So," I said. "What's the message?" "You are in danger, my friend." 'WHAT!?' I thought. "I must leave Mark." Don pushed some buttons on himself, and then he disappeared. "Well," I sighed. "That was odd." It was ten p.m., so I went to bed. I did not notice that a monster was outside my window.

Chapter Three - A Battle
"YAWN!" I had just woke up, but I was still very tired. I opened the curtains and I screamed. There was a 5 foot tall hairy monster outside! "ROAR!" it said. I was wide awake after that. My parents were on a trip, so my brother and I were the only ones in the house.

I frantically looked for a weapon that was good enough. Then I remembered. My dad had given me a real sword before he left for the trip. My mom did not know about this. I quickly got dressed, grabbed my sword, and ran outside. "Prepare to fight you ugly beast!" I yelled. I pictured a video game I owned like this battle. I thought I heard something say "ROUND 1! START!" In ten seconds, the monster was gone. Really. It ran the first time I swung my sword. Odd.

When I went inside my house, my brother was still sleeping! I grabbed an apple and woke up my brother. I tried to tell him what happened, but he did not believe me. "You're a bunch of baloney," he told me. Not everyone can believe me. I decided to go to my friend Tasha's house. She believes anything I tell her. When Tasha opened the door, she grabbed my shirt and dragged me to the basement. "I have something to tell you," she said. "Something important."

Chapter Four - Things Are Explained
Tasha let go of my shirt. "Sit," she ordered. I sat. "Tasha! You would not believe what happened this morning!" Tasha held up her hand. "I know Mark," Tasha said in almost a whisper. "Mark, danger is in store for you. You might be wondering, why? Well, I will tell you." I could not believe my ears. She knows what's going on? I grabbed a cookie from a plate in front of me.

"I will tell you something," she told me. "Your parents are always gone right Mark?" "Yes they are," I said. "Well, that's because they have to fight the monsters that are after you..." "What!?" I interrupted. "Monsters are trying to attack you because an evil king does not like your parents, and family. Including you," she explained. "So why do they only attack me?" I asked. "He hates you the most Mark. Evil King Adam hates kids named Mark, and your family. Your family angered him awhile back," "My parents are nice people!" I yelled.

Tasha ignored me. "I saw you went to the graveyard two days ago, yes?" she asked. "Yes I did, why?" "And you saw the tombstone that said 'Mark S. Doomed' right?" I nodded my head yes. "This is what it should be," Tasha said. She wrote something on a piece of paper. Tasha then handed it to me. It said 'Mark is doomed'.

I should have known the day will come. I assumed that I would have to go on a mission. And I did.

Chapter Five - Preparing
"So," I said. "Where do we do first?" "Washington of course!" Tasha exclaimed. "Of course," I said sarcastically. "How did I not know that?"

My other friend, Mike, also knew what was going on. "We go to Washington together!" he yelled. Mike has a quiet voice, so he was just saying it. To me it sounded like yelling because he is so quiet! I grabbed a bag and packed what I would need. Money, candy bars, cell phone, a book, etc. Once we were all packed, I remembered my brother. "What about Timmy?" I asked Tasha.

Tasha told me to be calm. "He will be staying at his friends house," Tasha said. I asked about my dog. Tasha said that he would be with Timmy. I let out a sigh of relief. 'I have nothing to worry about,' I thought. But I was wrong. A lot.

Chapter Six - The Plane of Doom
Mike, Tasha and I booked a plane to Washington. When we got on the plane, our seats were way up front. 'Cool,' I thought. After the plane took off, a stewardess came up to me and asked what I wanted for lunch. "What do you have?" I asked her back.

"Mud, liver, and more mud," she said. Her name tag said 'Sue' on it.

"Look 'Sue'," I told her. "Don't you have anything else, like a sandwich?" She just stood there, staring at me. "Uh, did I say something wrong?" I asked her.

"Kid, all we got is mud and liver. Make your choice. If you get me angry, something bad will happen to you," said Sue like she meant it. I gulped.

"Sandwich please!" Mike said. Mike can be clueless a lot. It is like he does not have a brain at times.

Suddenly, Sue was not Sue anymore. She was a monster. I then remembered that I can make things blow up with my mind. It's a long story. The plane was now the Plane of Doom! I made Sue blow up.

But with Sue blowing up, so did the plane. We landed safely in Washington.

Chapter Seven - The End?
Here is a review of what happened next. We found Evil King Adam, defeated him, and the monsters now belong to us. We all lived happily ever after. THE END!

End of Story!


cheesefanatic
cheesefanatic Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Ohhh, Sounds good! Can't wait to read the rest!


cheesefanatic
cheesefanatic Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Hi again just wondering if ou'd mind if I make a Halloweeen story, I know I don't need to ask but I don't want you to think I'm copying your idea!;)


ajmole
ajmole Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Sure! Go ahead! Write anything you want! As long as it follows the house rules I am fine.


cheesefanatic
cheesefanatic Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Thanks I'll make a new thread so you can read it!


ajmole
ajmole Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Cool!


Shaunyandtimmy500
Shaunyandtimmy500 Posted: Oct 25th 2009

WOW WOW WOAH! You win the virtual trophy for beginners writing!


cheesefanatic
cheesefanatic Posted: Oct 25th 2009

I've put it up!:D


ajmole
ajmole Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Awesome! Thanks Shaunyandtimmy500 for the trophy! :D


Shaunyandtimmy500
Shaunyandtimmy500 Posted: Oct 25th 2009

ok


Farmer29
Farmer29 Posted: Oct 25th 2009

Does anyone hear me?????????:'( i guess not


ajmole
ajmole Posted: Oct 25th 2009

THINGS TO REMEMBER ON THIS THREAD

1- Don't copy my idea. It will make me feel bad. :'(
2- Please post things related to the topic. If it is about a story of any kind that is fine.
3- If you don't think this is good, don't say it.
4- If you have any suggestions, please say. I would be happy to read them.
5- Follow the House Rules and don't say anything that would hurt peoples feelings.
6- Have fun reading my story!


timmythesheep848
timmythesheep848 Posted: Oct 26th 2009

brillant story!


ajmole
ajmole Posted: 1 week 5 days ago

I think I will fix the last chapter sometime today or tomorrow.


Windows Vista
Windows Vista Posted: 6 days ago

That is... brilliant! I didn't think it'd be as good as that! :)


ajmole
ajmole Posted: 6 days ago

Thanks Windows Vista!




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