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Sheep Talk > please coment especillay u Katie

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1. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

   HERE IT is my Rubbish story
   Amy and Sam’s Adventure
   
   
   One hot sunny morning Amy, Sam and Cody (their dog) were playing on the laptop. Amy had blonde curly hair and was wearing blue jeans and a Hannah Montana top with black boots on and was wearing blue jazzy earrings. Sam had black spiky hair and was wearing a WWE t-shirt with John Cena on and some black jeans he was also wearing England trainers. Cody was a westie with a blue collar. Amy and Sam were playing on the laptop and Sam pressed 123 and they were in a dark gloomy cave. The shelves were filled with weird potions. All of a sudden a witch appeared in front of them. Then they realized that the sly witch snatched the laptop off Sam but the witch did not see Cody. Cody bit the witch’s bum and she screamed like a baby!! Amy took the laptop then she said “Come and get me you big fat sly air bag!” shouted Amy.
   
   Amy pressed 123 again and they ended up in a swamp. They were all in a crooked tree. Amy screamed for helped. “It’s no good doing that Amy.” Sam said to Amy sharply. But two hungry alligator heard Amy scream for help. The branch broke but luckily there was a log. Cody saw a vine and stared pulling very hard Amy looked behind her and stared pulling as well Amy tapped Sam. “Sam help us to get to the land just there please! Hurry the alligator’s are coming!” said Amy in trembling voice.
   “Alright keep your hair women!” said Sam calmly but still wobbly. Finally Sam stared helping as well and then the alligators were an inch away Amy and Sam and Cody stared pulling then they got on the bank in one piece. “Oh my god that was so cool” “You mean scary!” interrupted Amy. “It was for you but you’re a girl not a boy the boys find loads of stuff cool girls don’t!” pointed out Sam.
   “Doesn’t matter now anyway just press 123 now please I want to get out of this dump!” said Amy. “Ok 123 there happy now” said Sam in a silly voice. “Stop it and there is no need to take that tone with me!” said Amy, very posh. They were back in the cave but the wicked witch was not there in her place was a unicorn! “Hello Amy and Sam how are you do you want a lift back home or not. “How do you know are names?” said Amy trembling.
   “Oh because I’ve been following you all the time but I was a tree and a table” explained the unicorn. “Yes please we’ll love a ride!” Amy and Sam said together. “Ok sure thing hope on” replied the unicorn. Amy and Sam hoped on the unicorn and the unicorn took them back to Birmingham but the unicorn only went 14 miles there house was 15 miles and did not want to walk 1 more mile. “Excuse me can take us another mile please” said Sam politely. “No sorry I can only go 14 miles bye” said the unicorn gently trying not to hurt there feelings and then the unicorn disappeared. “Now what are we going to do let me get on your back. “No” said Sam firmly. “Fine then” answered Amy. “Hold on I’ve got a 4 pounds with me want to take bus? Asked Sam. “Sure why did you bring 4 pounds? Questioned Amy. “You never ever no do you?” said Sam. “Yeah that is true” Grumbled Amy. They walked to number 51 to take them back to Birmingham it took them back home
   

2. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

   I knew it was rubbish no one has repiled

3. By wghtmf Sep 9th 2009

   It isn't rubbish it's just long so we haven't had a chance to read it yet.

4. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

   oh i wish katie will coment

5. By wghtmf Sep 9th 2009

   Lol I just read it it's cool

6. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

   thanks

7. By katie Aardman Staff Sep 9th 2009

   hi mmmiiiaaa, remember that we're also busy working on other sites, so don't be upset if we don't reply straight away.
   
   I think your story's great, do you want to be an author when you are older? Perhaps other people could leave their comments too...

8. By wghtmf Sep 9th 2009

   I'm already an author katie!

9. By sam ere chillin Sep 9th 2009

   :surprise how?

10. By sam ere chillin Sep 9th 2009

    

    how

11. By wghtmf Sep 9th 2009

    Because it doesn't matter what age you are, you can publish books.

12. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

    Yes Katie i do want to be an autor when i'm older My role model is Jacqueline Wilson

13. By concon Sep 9th 2009

    http://sites.google.com/site/storywritingworld/

14. By concon Sep 9th 2009

    Want me to add your story?

15. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

    Yes please i've got to finsh the story thore

16. By concon Sep 9th 2009

    Ok cool.
    
    Going in for a shower

17. By mmmiiiaaa Sep 9th 2009

    ok see u in a minture or a bit

18. By 123 Satr 321 Sep 9th 2009

    I had the right qualifications to do a book,i made 1 and i sent them it,But they reply back,saying you cna publish it,but i had other thing son my mind!

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